Thank you for your application! As we get the feeling that the application was simply rushed and can be improved on with some work, and as what is there mostly looks like you had good starts (particularly in the reincarnated areas), we aren't going to reject it but instead give you a solid amount of revisions. We hope to hear back from you!

Before we can process it further, we would however ask for the following modifications:

• Please control your application for spacing (for the ease of reading, please place blank lines between paragraphs), punctuation (this was a frequent issue) and grammar (this was a minor issue).
  
• Canon: You omitted this section, please add it (in this case it would also be important to include if your canon is the films or the novelizations of the films).
  
• Pre-incarnation appearance: Please either give a physical description or link to a picture of your character.
  
• Pre-incarnation history: Anything that is not written down needs to be linked to. You may link to wikis or prior write-ups done by yourself. Remember that your canon material may only be expanded on but not contradicted by headcanon or material from other versions of the canon, and please remember to mark headcanon clearly by formatting it in italics.
  
• Reincarnation History: Please provide a clearer chronological order and a few more descriptions. For example: When was he "RAF-trained" under what circumstances?
  
• Personality and Differences: More! Plain and simple. We don't need an essay, but we do need more than the bare-bones description that is there right now. Expanding on what is there should be sufficient. Just put meat on those bones, for example by explaining how his loyalty or recklessness shows.
  
• Abilities: Bullet points, please! And please expand on that superhuman blood thing.
  
• Samples: Please give us another reincarnated sample, this time in a more everyday situation. We'd also like to ask for another preincarnation sample: Specifically, please write two paragraphs or so in which he reminiscences about his Kobayashi Maru experience.
  

We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to hear back from you soon!