Sorry about the wait! Between us having to discuss your app before being able to get back to you and things being crazy irl, our answer got away from us. We'll do our best to not let that happen again!

There is definite improvement here! Before we can process the application further, we would however like to ask for the following modifications:

• Reincarnation History: You don't seem to have implemented any changes here? So to repeat: While some basics are there, we would like to see about 2 more paragraphs. Just flesh out the bare bones that are there, for example by adding details on what she's doing in university (which seems to be where she is right now?) and what exactly you mean by "play".
  
• First echo: Almost there! Please just include what kind of echo this is (memory?) and what the event in her former life was that this occurrence in her reincarnation resembled.
  
• Personality differences: We would like to see more here. Please give us more than one-liners - how do these differences affect her life, and how does her life affect them? Try to give us three paragraphs here.
  
• Abilities: These need to be much better defined. For example: How does she create a zombie and what exact abilities would such zombies have? How strong is "superstrength"? How does her hypnosis work and how can it be counteracted? And so on.
  
• 1st person sample: While this is significantly improved from your last sample, we'd like to see more - nothing different this time, but we'd like to ask you to expand the sample. Please try to expand it to contain roughly ten spoken sentences.

We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to hear back from you soon!